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#1 IrishHeart

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Posted 22 June 2011 - 03:11 PM

Celiac Haiku of the Day
So I saw this website called CELIAC BITES :lol:(love THAT name!) and the guy posted this Celiac Haiku and I thought some of you guys would find it clever and perhaps wish to compose one of your own. (Maybe it's just the English Prof. in me? :rolleyes: )

You know the format--
1st line 5 syllables
2nd line 7 syllables
3rd line 5 syllables

His is posted March 7, 2011 by Tom
The Essence of Celiac Happiness is Haiku


"I want a doughnut.

But I cant have one of course.

Ill settle for rice."

:)

(I am not sure I can compose one that reflects my "happiness" about celiac just yet :unsure: ....I'll work on it and post later...)
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 03:20 PM

we tried end of year summary Haikus.


http://www.celiac.co...year-in-review/
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 03:33 PM

Oh, well.... sorry...I did not know that as I wasn't a member yet. :unsure:

I just thought it was clever....okay, then never mind. :( wow...now, I feel like a dope.
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"Life is not the way it's supposed to be. It's the way it is. The way we cope with it makes the difference." Virginia Satir

"The strongest of all warriors are these two - time and patience." Leo Tolstoy

"If you want to lift yourself up, lift up someone else" Booker T. Washington

“If idiots could fly, the sky would be like an airport.”― Laura Davenport 

"Do or do not. There is no try. "-  Yoda.

"LTES"  Gem 2014

 

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#4 kareng

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Posted 22 June 2011 - 03:48 PM

Oh, well.... sorry...I did not know that as I wasn't a member yet. :unsure:

I just thought it was clever....okay, then never mind. :( wow...now, I feel like a dope.



No! No! Sorry! That was a rather abrupt post. My son was trying to explain in minute detail a fix he had made on his car, with hand gestures. I'm supposed to look like I understand it. But I am glad when a teenager wants to talk to his mom.

I thought you might like to see our previous attempts. We should do ones about Celiac!

I like Haikus because they are short! :)

I will ruminate on one about gluten & be back later.
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 04:26 PM

I saw a similar thread on a literature site I use to frequent, but they took the last line of the previous poem to make as their first. That might be fun :) I'll try.

I'll settle for rice

But not the Krispies with malt

because they "pop" wrong. :P
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gomban gyldan. t ws god cyning! -Excerpt from the prologue of Beowulf. :)

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Posted 22 June 2011 - 04:33 PM

I'm not doing well, here! I tend more to Dr. Suess!

Gluten

I do not like it in a bread
I do not like it in a bed,
I do not like it on my threads,
I do not like it, it will make me dead!
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 05:07 PM

I'm not doing well, here! I tend more to Dr. Suess!

Gluten

I do not like it in a bread
I do not like it in a bed,
I do not like it on my threads,
I do not like it, it will make me dead!


As a frequent reader of Dr Seuss at bedtime, I love this!!

Here's my try:

One speck of gluten
Shaky, legs tingle, brain fog
What was I saying?!
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 05:19 PM

Love this idea as it's something my work colleagues and I do via email about events at work. Here's my attempt:

Whole foods every day,
No more joint or muscle pain,
I am happier.
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 05:38 PM

OMG!! just popped back on ....these are GREAT you guys!!! :)

(I'm still trying to compose mine :blink: ...)
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"Life is not the way it's supposed to be. It's the way it is. The way we cope with it makes the difference." Virginia Satir

"The strongest of all warriors are these two - time and patience." Leo Tolstoy

"If you want to lift yourself up, lift up someone else" Booker T. Washington

“If idiots could fly, the sky would be like an airport.”― Laura Davenport 

"Do or do not. There is no try. "-  Yoda.

"LTES"  Gem 2014

 

Misdiagnosed for 25+ years; Finally Diagnosed with Celiac  11/01/10.  Double DQ2 genes. This thing tried to kill me. I view Celiac as a fire breathing dragon --and I have run my sword right through his throat.
I. Win. bliss-smiley-emoticon.gif


#10 kareng

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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:06 PM

(I'm still trying to compose mine :blink: ...)


Me too! Mine was not a Haiku.
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:33 PM

Love this idea as it's something my work colleagues and I do via email about events at work. Here's my attempt:

Whole foods every day,
No more joint or muscle pain,
I am happier.

I am happier
was food my only disease?
Without, I am whole
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:35 PM

Me too! Mine was not a Haiku.

Me too! Mine was not
a Haiku confuses me
brain fog in a verse
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:37 PM

(I'm still trying to compose mine :blink: ...)

I'm still trying to
compose. Mine is trapped within
but songs burst with ease
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:41 PM

Me too! Mine was not
a Haiku confuses me
brain fog in a verse



Once again, Thank you
For writing my own Haiku
I can't get it right
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Posted 22 June 2011 - 06:47 PM

Me too! Mine was not
a Haiku confuses me
brain fog in a verse



I don't know what the heck this is . . . Dr. Seuss does Haiku??? :unsure: :lol:

Brain fog in a verse
Strawberry jam in a purse
This rhyme's getting worse
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